Hey All! I’m back again doing the #8sunday with the wonderful Weekend Writing Warriors! I really loved reading the other snippets! This week’s excerpt from my debut novella The Trouble with Playing Cupid shows the scene when December calls up her best friend, Clarissa panicking over Tom taking her out on a date.
“Tom wants this to be our first date,We’re at the movies in Flushing!”
“Ooh, so you’re panicking in the restroom now right?”
“Yes! My heart won’t stop racing and he called me sweetheart and said I looked beautiful and what do I do, Clarissa? Do I run?”
“Why would you run? No! Focus! This is Tom Elmswood. The guy whose movies you made me watch a billion times just so you could memorize his face, remember?”
December nodded, even though Clarissa couldn’t see her through the phone.
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September 28, 2014 at 1:06 pm
Delightful, Tamara. The dialogue took be back to my early years of dating the hot guy every girl wanted to go out with and sharing her feelings with her BFF. Fun and so real.
September 28, 2014 at 6:21 pm
thanks so much, Charmaine!! ❤
September 28, 2014 at 3:24 pm
LOL…she’s hiding out in the bathroom. Very fun, glad her friend is there to talk her down off the ledge
September 29, 2014 at 6:11 am
Thanks so much, Meka! ❤
September 28, 2014 at 4:20 pm
This snippet was awesome! I love the way you describe how December nods on the phone while talking to her friend. I do that a lot when I’m talking on the phone, I’ve even caught myself waving my hands around while trying to describe something. Classic! I love this book!
September 29, 2014 at 6:17 am
Thanks, Neva!! I love your book, Liliana!! I couldn’t put it down!! ❤
September 28, 2014 at 6:00 pm
Very fun snippet. I love that she’s hiding in the bathroom, thinking about running. I hope Clarissa can talk her down.
September 29, 2014 at 6:17 am
Thanks for reading, Alexis 🙂
September 28, 2014 at 6:13 pm
Love the communication between friends…it’s very real.
September 28, 2014 at 7:41 pm
Thanks so much, Sarah 🙂
September 28, 2014 at 8:01 pm
You’ve definitely captured the first-date-freak-out moment! This was a lot of fun to read.
September 29, 2014 at 5:56 am
Thanks so much, Christina 🙂
September 28, 2014 at 8:32 pm
She;s really on edge.
September 29, 2014 at 5:55 am
She’s a bundle of nerves, Sue! thanks for reading 🙂
September 29, 2014 at 2:38 am
I remember those days. 🙂 🙂 🙂 I was always the one panicking over the guy, the date, etc. My best friend was the one telling me to calm down, breathe, enjoy myself. Can’t wait to ready more. 🙂
September 29, 2014 at 5:41 am
Thanks so much, Jennifer! 🙂
September 29, 2014 at 9:34 am
This was fun! I’m excited and anxious right along with her 🙂